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first time without lineart x.x
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I think that the background really clashes with the actual picture itself. The background is all nice and light, looks like a background for a cute anime girl. For Flandre and her expression in this picture, I don't think that was the best choice. I think you could improve it by making the background darker and more badass.

I also find the anatomy and proportions a bit off.The legs are pointing in an unusual direction. The showing hand is a bit too long, and the neck is too long, too. The coloring looks great; however. Good, but could be better.
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Alright, first critique. Hope it isn't too bad.

First off, it's Flandre Scarlet, so it's instantly badass.
The background seems to be refering to her spell card, "Starbow Break" which is fine and all, but it makes the character itself less important to the viewer. The shading is alright, but it could be improved upon. The hand that's showing, is terribly drawn; going by how it should look, this is a horrible attempt at it. The next is too long, and the legs are bend at an awkward angle. It looks like it would hurt. Also, the arm length is too long. It should only go slightly past the waist. The expression is lessened by having her hair covering her eyes, less manical looking. Furthermore, how you shaded in her hair is bugging me. You went a little over board when shading it in. You should see more of the original color. And the hair that's going over her shoulder isn't flowing correctly. You drew it too stiff. It should be lying on her shoulder and chest. It would be best is you made the hair slightly shorter (Her ponytail) Her hat and wings look alright. To say the least. You might want to add more movement to your pictures; and her show both hands of the character in the future. It would look more realistic. All and all, this is a decent attempt at drawing one of the most amazing Touhou characters. I look forward to seeing any future art from you.
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TheLifeMadeOfDeath Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
i hav no idea what its b from bt,,,,

FUCKIN RAINBOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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:iconinner-instability:
Inner-instability Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
lol

"Can I play with rainbows?"
"yes"
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:iconthelifemadeofdeath:
TheLifeMadeOfDeath Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
*plays with rainbows*

im so fuckd this weekend...
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:iconinner-instability:
Inner-instability Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
lol

why?
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:iconthelifemadeofdeath:
TheLifeMadeOfDeath Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
gonna b @z a freinds party 2moro nite which we"ll b up till @ least 3 or i wil then i hav to enterain lilttle children useing a fire and my voice while half dead from th party it will b interestin wake me up if i fall asleep
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Inner-instability Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Okay here's what you do

You wake up at about 5 am and you step outside and take a deep breath and get real high and scream from the top of your lungs "WHAT'S GOING ON!?"
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:iconthelifemadeofdeath:
TheLifeMadeOfDeath Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
yeah im not sur how well tht gonna work i think i rathr stay up 4 2 nites straight thnn crash in bed as soon as i gt home
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Symphonic-Nightmare Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012
Awesome.
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:iconinner-instability:
Inner-instability Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks ^^
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AnonymousBlue99 Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
fun :D
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:iconinner-instability:
Inner-instability Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
^^
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AnonymousBlue99 Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
WHY IS GERARD WAY SO CUTE OMG
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Symphonic-Nightmare Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012
Control, Abbey. :p
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AnonymousBlue99 Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
SO CUTE D:D::D:D:D::
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Symphonic-Nightmare Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012
uklidsjkhgvfshfcsdl, :p
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AnonymousBlue99 Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
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y u no in pants gerard
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Symphonic-Nightmare Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012
._.
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:iconinner-instability:
Inner-instability Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I dunno o-o
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AnonymousBlue99 Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
LOL
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DragonBallZcat Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012  Student General Artist
the wings are just darling, i drew something similar not too long ago.
cept mine is no color >.>
nice job on the colouring ^^
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:iconinner-instability:
Inner-instability Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Awesome.

She's Flandre Scarlet from Project Touhou.

thanks ^^
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DragonBallZcat Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012  Student General Artist
holyshit ive heard of that. this dude that sorta stalks me loves touhou.
and so does his friend.
and they play the songs.
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Symphonic-Nightmare Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012
Lol he would like Touhou.
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DragonBallZcat Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2012  Student General Artist
yerp. look at all them lolis.
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Inner-instability Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
holy kjvskzdfhskjfkfjjkhgjsfhlfkjfkljhsfj WHO IS THIS PERSON THAT I MUST MEET NOW?
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DragonBallZcat Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2012  Student General Artist
cat let you meet one of them and i will explain why in my journal entry.
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Inner-instability Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
okay.... ;-;
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Guns-n-Angel-Wings Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012  Student General Artist
Her legs are all derped and her arm is too long
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Inner-instability Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Arms can reach down just above your knees without bending. She's flying with her knees bent and pointing inwards.
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Guns-n-Angel-Wings Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012  Student General Artist
Yeah but the torso looks too short to be like that, and feet dont naturally turn totally straight in like that
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Inner-instability Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm not saying that the Anatomy is perfect but it makes sense. And her torso is fine and I know I fucked up on the feet.
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Guns-n-Angel-Wings Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012  Student General Artist
Yeah the fingers are awkwarddddddd
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Inner-instability Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
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A sensable girl like that

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Yes you, hey, yes you, hey
Beautiful, loveable
Yes you, hey, yes you, hey
Now let's go until the end

Oppa is Gangnam style, Gangnam style
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Eh- Sexy Lady, Oppa is Gangnam style
Eh- Sexy Lady oh oh oh oh

On top of the running man is the flying man, baby baby
I'm a man who knows a thing or two
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I'm a man who knows a thing or two

You know what I'm saying
Oppa is Gangnam style

Eh- Sexy Lady, Oppa is Gangnam style
Eh- Sexy Lady oh oh oh oh
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Guns-n-Angel-Wings Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012  Student General Artist
WTF!?
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:iconinner-instability:
Inner-instability Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I like your booty but I'm not gay.
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