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The body is sadly out of proportion, with the arm too long and the hand is unfortunately, and fundamentally flawed, with no definition between thumb and fingers. The legs are in an odd position, facing inward.
This work feels incomplete, and not very detailed (except perhaps for face) with the best bit being the right side of the bonnet/cap, which however looks slightly incomplete. The wings are unconventional, and blend in with the background, unfortunately not standing out in the way that you appear to desire.
The hair is perhaps slightly out of proportion (at least in my eyes) and if it was true for the character; then not painted in correctly with the right side of her face, as it just appears to be a mass of gold.
One thing I am a bit confused upon is the highlight of her hand, which must be one of the worst part of this artwork. This draws to attention the flaws, when you would rather fade them back and perhaps bring to attention the finer parts of the work.
I however, commend you on your ability to try and attempt to draw something you obviously have little experience with; hands. Most artists just hide them away/don't put them in the painting, and therefore have reduced their ability to learn from what they do. In order to get a more realistic (and fluid) picture of a hand, it is better if you were to do more studies of the work.
Keep working hard!
First off, it's Flandre Scarlet, so it's instantly badass.
The background seems to be refering to her spell card, "Starbow Break" which is fine and all, but it makes the character itself less important to the viewer. The shading is alright, but it could be improved upon. The hand that's showing, is terribly drawn; going by how it should look, this is a horrible attempt at it. The next is too long, and the legs are bend at an awkward angle. It looks like it would hurt. Also, the arm length is too long. It should only go slightly past the waist. The expression is lessened by having her hair covering her eyes, less manical looking. Furthermore, how you shaded in her hair is bugging me. You went a little over board when shading it in. You should see more of the original color. And the hair that's going over her shoulder isn't flowing correctly. You drew it too stiff. It should be lying on her shoulder and chest. It would be best is you made the hair slightly shorter (Her ponytail) Her hat and wings look alright. To say the least. You might want to add more movement to your pictures; and her show both hands of the character in the future. It would look more realistic. All and all, this is a decent attempt at drawing one of the most amazing Touhou characters. I look forward to seeing any future art from you.
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