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Flandre by Inner-instability Flandre by Inner-instability
first time without lineart x.x
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:icongenocider--syo:
I think that the background really clashes with the actual picture itself. The background is all nice and light, looks like a background for a cute anime girl. For Flandre and her expression in this picture, I don't think that was the best choice. I think you could improve it by making the background darker and more badass.

I also find the anatomy and proportions a bit off.The legs are pointing in an unusual direction. The showing hand is a bit too long, and the neck is too long, too. The coloring looks great; however. Good, but could be better.
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Alright, first critique. Hope it isn't too bad.

First off, it's Flandre Scarlet, so it's instantly badass.
The background seems to be refering to her spell card, "Starbow Break" which is fine and all, but it makes the character itself less important to the viewer. The shading is alright, but it could be improved upon. The hand that's showing, is terribly drawn; going by how it should look, this is a horrible attempt at it. The next is too long, and the legs are bend at an awkward angle. It looks like it would hurt. Also, the arm length is too long. It should only go slightly past the waist. The expression is lessened by having her hair covering her eyes, less manical looking. Furthermore, how you shaded in her hair is bugging me. You went a little over board when shading it in. You should see more of the original color. And the hair that's going over her shoulder isn't flowing correctly. You drew it too stiff. It should be lying on her shoulder and chest. It would be best is you made the hair slightly shorter (Her ponytail) Her hat and wings look alright. To say the least. You might want to add more movement to your pictures; and her show both hands of the character in the future. It would look more realistic. All and all, this is a decent attempt at drawing one of the most amazing Touhou characters. I look forward to seeing any future art from you.
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TheLifeMadeOfDeath Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
i hav no idea what its b from bt,,,,

FUCKIN RAINBOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Inner-instability Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
lol

"Can I play with rainbows?"
"yes"
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TheLifeMadeOfDeath Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
*plays with rainbows*

im so fuckd this weekend...
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Inner-instability Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
lol

why?
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TheLifeMadeOfDeath Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
gonna b @z a freinds party 2moro nite which we"ll b up till @ least 3 or i wil then i hav to enterain lilttle children useing a fire and my voice while half dead from th party it will b interestin wake me up if i fall asleep
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Inner-instability Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Okay here's what you do

You wake up at about 5 am and you step outside and take a deep breath and get real high and scream from the top of your lungs "WHAT'S GOING ON!?"
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TheLifeMadeOfDeath Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
yeah im not sur how well tht gonna work i think i rathr stay up 4 2 nites straight thnn crash in bed as soon as i gt home
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Symphonic-Nightmare Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012
Awesome.
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Inner-instability Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks ^^
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AnonymousBlue99 Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
fun :D
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